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In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 05:45 AM




Well he's young, he's got shorts, pretty scrawny and has messy hair.
Still a Pheonix in progress or a final design ?


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 07:45 AM

Looks very cool to me.
But i don't think they have sneakers there... (so maybe sandals or low boots)
And he looks mighty complicated, are you sure you can draw him like that? I mean if u can, all the better. But that is a lot of little designs to draw 40 times in a row, and all.
The belt looks really good, maybe show a bit more belly to accent his youth. Face and hair is perfect for me.
Is he wearing bracelets or am i seeing it wrong? If he is, then fine. If it is armor then he shouldn't be wearing any yet.
Oh hey, have you thought about tattoos yet? I can't come up with any :shy:

He looks so cute, aww i can see him be thrown of a cliff already!


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 07:50 AM

It actually isn't that detailed, it's because of all the shading and stuff.
Tatoos ... umm i'll try to think of some, and lmao thrown off a cliff . . . now i'm gonna be seeing that xD

Oh and thanks for all the pointers, i'll re-sketch ^^
*slave plans to sketch*


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:04 AM

Well, i wouldn't re-sketch already. I'm just little old me, have no real authority or anything. Wait till the rest sees it, then see what they say. But i'm pretty sure it's final character design. You did a really great job girl, i certainly think you kick some major drawing touchas! :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:06 AM

:grin::grin::grin::grin::grin::grin::grin:
YAY, well now to work on the others :nods:

can you send me a full description of piere.
head, what he'd wear, body type.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:19 AM

I have absolutely no idea, Arctic came up with the character.
All i know is at some point he will be lancer extraordinaire and a generallooking hoipolloity type.
But when he's 13 or 14, i do not know.
He has no parents, plays soccer and has a french sounding name...
I'd say gangly. 14 year old football players are generally gangly. Long trousers and shirt, but unclean and krooked (no parents). An old cerimonial spear. Black or brown hair, no facial hair yet (maybe little ugly frenchstyle teenage moustache hehe), dark complexion (still caucasian), maybe a little dirt on his face or something. A know-it-all, so quite a linear face. Short hair i think, nothing too fancy. Or maybe sleek hair.

I am totally guessing here :grin:


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:24 AM

Damn arctic, he should get his ass online, i wanna get on with the next character while pheonix needs to be viewed by the others.

Gimme one of your characters ? if you've made another one =P


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:32 AM

Phoenix needs a grandfather in the first chapter.
So very old version of phoenix (is it me that's wrong or is it you guys?) but with scars and gray hair, with a balding spot. A grandfatherly beard (but not long) and a very very friendly face. Twinkly eyes and all that. Wearing a simple cloak. He can be quite muscular if you want. Driving a coach.
Not a permanent character so no need to get into it too deeply.

Also Talon needs to be finalised i think. Or did i mis an earlier post?


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:34 AM

Umm... i can't be wrong i'm the one reading =P
Lol a very old version of pheonix, this will be funny.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:37 AM

It's Phoenix, i checked.
You're thinking of Pheonix Wright probably

Wait a minute! didn't you use a closed thread for this? there are guests in here! Sho sho, guests. You shouldn't be in here.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:39 AM

umm . . . re-phrase that xD


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Arctic - 06-20-2007 08:41 AM

thumbs up, but it looks a bit too much like sora now xD


make him look less innocent and we're good.


(Btw, this is him at the start of the story, right? cuz otherwise he should look older)


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:44 AM

yea start of story, lol.
Man you writers, you say make him look like sora and now it's too much =P
Back to the sketch pad.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:46 AM

Uhh Kingdom harts right?
Doesn't that guy have yellow shorts and sneakers and brown hair and stuff?
*failing to see resemblance from very old memory of the game*

Arctic give that girl a detailed description of piere please, or just edit mine and make me look stupid. Either way works for me :D

Oh and Karuru what do you want me to rephrase my dear?


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:48 AM

The pheonix/phoenix thingy with wright or something and thank you geyter for sticking up for the resemblence to sora thing.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 08:57 AM

Oh well, apparantly someone has been typing pheonix instead of phoenix. and pheonix wright was an ace attourny. The kind that checks sparkly computers while staying at the hospital. (so i guess i know who it could be...)


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 08:59 AM

who O.O ?


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 09:03 AM

Sigh.
It's Sparks' avatar.
How long have you been awake? Tell the truth!


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 09:04 AM

Oh sparky ^^;
Umm, i had went to sleep like 1:30am yesterday and woke 5:20am this morning xD


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 09:07 AM

Go to sleep!
Or... draw a bit more.
(muhahaha, i can see myself in a sweatshop full of karuru's drawing the night away! :devil::devil::devil: )


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 09:12 AM

Lmao, i will sleep in afew minutes.
Drawing doesn't make me sweat and if the shop was full of my drawings it would make you dizzy.
It would be like bombardment of karuru =P


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Arctic - 06-20-2007 10:38 AM

Piere -

Think



Except cooler. and more fancy (since you love details so much)


Talon - Male version of




and with a sword that i will soon design.





Oh, and a possible reference for older phoenix.



seems more like what i was looking for than seth.












Yeah, i draw a lot from fire emblem.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 10:46 AM

Great stuff!
But Ph should look a bit happier.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - CrazyBleachFan - 06-20-2007 01:13 PM

Really cool guys, but Artic that's the male version of Talon? Idk maybe less green hair, high heels, or did I not get the picture. Lancer and Phoenix look great. Geyter I think Artic just gave him a serious face lol.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Arctic - 06-20-2007 01:55 PM

A male version of that lmao


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-20-2007 04:49 PM

Thank's Arctic for the pictures, lol i'll do my best to sketch the rest of the characters.

Hey, Nii-san If you want ph look happier that might make his rebellious punkness go down abit, to a lil runt that looks cute =P


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - geyter - 06-20-2007 11:36 PM

Well we want him to have fun with his mates in GC. That's why he is a grunt and not straight away a commander... Like a smarter ares or like Haru or something. Once he gets higher in ranking the coolness can begin.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-21-2007 03:37 AM

Ok, this will be interesting.
Well i'll try and get some sort of sketch done today, if my addiction to this forum doesn't take control. (which i think it has )


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Arctic - 06-21-2007 04:01 AM

true, have him be all cool when he's out for revenge.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-21-2007 04:17 AM

ok, right *taking notes*
. . . ack ?! the forum has sucked me in, so have we got any deadlines or anything ?


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Sparks - 06-21-2007 04:55 AM

No deadlines, but the faster the better ;D


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-21-2007 04:55 AM

Hiya sparky, nice to see you online and ok, i'll try to work abit faster =P


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Sparks - 06-21-2007 05:08 AM

yeah, i went to a mates house. :D


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Karuru - 06-22-2007 06:05 PM

hmmm . .. guys should i simplify my drawings or keep them as they are ?
It's might just me, but for some reason i can't picture the style that i draw right now in the manga.


RE: In progress or final character design : Pheonix - Arctic - 06-23-2007 01:35 PM

up to you, if you add more detail its just more work for you


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-24-2007 05:50 PM

I don't mind detail on clothing, it's just the faces . . .


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-24-2007 11:35 PM

u go girl...~~~


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 04:20 AM

Hehe, thanks for the support ^^

Though i'm still abit confused and how i should compose the faces.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 07:02 PM

hmmm...
maybe for phonix,(once again i dont give a damn on spelling -_-")u should like make him an above average joe face and make his buddy pierre the hansome one who takes away all the girls hearts....
but they all ignore phonix or use him to get to pierre.....

for the axe guy, give him a average joe face with a ridiculous hair style which he thinks make him good looking( like elvis-no scratch that... too common)

for phoenix's arch-enemy, give him small evil eyes with a scar over one showing how much he has been throught to get wat he wants....
and give him a big mouth so he can do the realli evil smile...

hmmm.... maybe ill send a scan to help....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 08:42 PM

Lol, "average joe" it's funny, but thing is what do you mean by that =P
Also yea, post a scan in or something to show me, it would help alot.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - geyter - 06-25-2007 09:50 PM

I vote pipecurls, like that saxophone guy on one piece! (it would go with his beard... And we can make jokes that he's wearing curling thingies in his hair when he wakes up. And a moustache/hair net)


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 09:55 PM

can you show me a picture of the saxphone guy on one piece.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 10:20 PM

well....
i was doing my homework while doing this....
it should be enough thou....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - geyter - 06-25-2007 10:36 PM

Ahaha Talon is high as a kite man!


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 10:39 PM

oro?
waddya mean?


RE: In progress : Phoenix - geyter - 06-25-2007 10:49 PM

he looks as if he's been on a relaxing vacation to amsterdam?
The grin is too cartoonish. doesn't look evil. Besides the guy is supposed to be charming... maybe only evil smile when killing the innocent...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 10:53 PM

thats why the evil smile....
plus if u do the face shadowing, the evil smile in the dark looks scary....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:04 PM

OMG i love your drawings, their expressions crack me up, rofl :lol:

Ok, i guess i'll stick with my original idea of Ph.
The axe guy kinda reminds me of the devil going afro xD i think it's the chin :devil:


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:08 PM

well...
i have been drawing manga since i was like..... 8?


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:10 PM

I've only been drawing for about 2 years and in sept it would be 3 years.

I started when i was 12, i'll be 15 next week, but i remember starting to draw at the beginning of a school year xD


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:16 PM

ur younger than me by one year....
DAMN.....
i thought i was the youngest T-T...
no matter,
we can have his eyes light up... funnily u noe....
and he squints hes eyes alot that talon.....
but try to make him as evilly cool/lame as possible...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:17 PM

I have an idea, you can help me with drawing the faces by - drawing some expressions for me to get an idea :nods:


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:21 PM

funny ones and normal ones?


RE: In progress : Phoenix - geyter - 06-25-2007 11:25 PM

Uh guys? Talon is sexy, soive, charming... remember?
And Sparks is younger than karuru, so is Arctic.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:26 PM

....
ill go hang myself now...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:27 PM

hmmm...
u can look nice with squinted eyes...
i can show u...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:28 PM

Yea, in fact Arctic is the youngest. =P

Well, i can do happy, seductive and normal expressions fine. It's just some angry-ish expressions and afew others, that i can't think of.

I'll ask when i have an expression for you to help me on ^^


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:31 PM

kk~~~
well hows the drawing going?


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:42 PM

I'm not drawing yet, my neck is still a lil sore from all the headbanging i did yesterday at my friend's beach party, which then turned into a house party . . .
I did those weapon sketches a moment ago so i'll let my imagination take a break xD

(i have photo's of me in a silly punkish outfit and the group dancing *laughs* . . . my friend put it on the net =.=)


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:46 PM

oh well, ive finished my homework....
i might as well draw something for fun....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:49 PM

Draw Ph's expressions, or what you think they would be. :3


RE: In progress : Phoenix - geyter - 06-25-2007 11:53 PM

Why are you still on Ph ellie? didn't you finish him like a week ago? you have him down girl, let him free...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-25-2007 11:57 PM

its okay...
i have free time anyway


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-25-2007 11:58 PM

Fine . . . i'll stop messing with Ph . . . i guess next is pierre. xD

(but do the expressions i need them =P )


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 12:43 AM

getting the emotions part 1 up.....
im tired... its 11pm....
tmr got school....
but i can stay up for another hour....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 12:53 AM

here they are~~~
ta-da ~~~~
emotion showcase number 1
[attachment=64]


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 12:54 AM

It's like 4pm here in england, so have the rest of the night to do some stuff xD
Thanks for sketching some expressions.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 12:56 AM

Umm, can you make the expressions abit more detailed.
It's just the way i draw the faces . . . i need more facial detail xD

Other than that, they're awesome and more thank you's ^^


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 12:59 AM

okay....
ill haf to remodify and put emotes2 on top of that....
oh well...
my parents locked up the scanner room and started nagging at me....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 01:01 AM

It's ok, there's always tomorrow and the day after that.
You should sleep, afterall you have school tomorrow.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 01:03 AM

dont u? -_-'|"


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 01:04 AM

Yea, but i'm only going into school for my test, then i go home.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 01:06 AM

i see...
my exams finished so i can stay up late and help u guys~~~
i noticed there was a girl forum too...-_-

well....i wonder how we'll do the backgrounds ....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 01:10 AM

Well this is mainly about phoenix (you don't wanna steal his spotlight) lol

make another thread about backgrouds.


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-26-2007 01:13 AM

oops wrong thread.....
but phoenix is pretty much done....
except u need emotions all that...


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-26-2007 01:15 AM

Yes pretty much .. now i have to work on pierre abit more


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Arctic - 06-26-2007 07:28 AM

hah suckers no school :D


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-27-2007 12:09 AM

emotes 1.1~~~
if its  still too small, gimme a ring
[attachment=66]


RE: In progress : Phoenix - jonaling - 06-27-2007 12:13 AM

oy ya, karuru, since pheonix is nearly finished, post the final draft ya, front view, side view and half of 45 degree angle....
so possibly, i can help u do some drawings when ur too tired and all that....


RE: In progress : Phoenix - Karuru - 06-27-2007 01:43 AM

Lol, for some reason i've been feeling extra lazy lately . . . i haven't been in the mood for drawing xD
I can only say i will try to, not 100% sure if i'll post any new sketches in.